She is lovely.

Sweet coloring job, although I do think a bit more contrast in the colors used wouldn't hurt, even small differences in tone between the various attributes could help. There's a bit too much dark chocolate brown in there, to the point where her outfit and skin start visually blending together, and because the only alternative (besides the also brownish 'white' skin) seems to be an even darker brown, her facial features in particular get quite muddled, just look at those eyelids and compare them to the original.

The head of her cock suffers the same fate, since there's almost no way to distinguish the pure black lineart from the colored areas if they clash directly, so the urethra almost disappears. And I'm sure this can't all just be blamed on my monitor, since it has a VA panel that should excel at blacks and contrasts.

That having been said though, from a technical point of view it's still fine work. Good shading (a real improvement over the original around the crotch), good use of highlights on places like the nose (though on the latex, the monochrome one needed to exaggerate them and this could be toned down a little here with some gradients).
And speaking about gradients, I like what you did with those breasts. While Wolfy-Nail did a surpringly good job giving them depth perception for a monochrome drawing, they still have more of it here, which is exactly what coloring should do.

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Yeah... I actually don't know why I'm going all art critic all of a sudden, but hope it helps Wingr should he read this. :P

Jugofthat said:
Sweet coloring job, although I do think a bit more contrast in the colors used wouldn't hurt, even small differences in tone between the various attributes could help. There's a bit too much dark chocolate brown in there, to the point where her outfit and skin start visually blending together, and because the only alternative (besides the also brownish 'white' skin) seems to be an even darker brown, her facial features in particular get quite muddled, just look at those eyelids and compare them to the original.

The head of her cock suffers the same fate, since there's almost no way to distinguish the pure black lineart from the colored areas if they clash directly, so the urethra almost disappears. And I'm sure this can't all just be blamed on my monitor, since it has a VA panel that should excel at blacks and contrasts.

That having been said though, from a technical point of view it's still fine work. Good shading (a real improvement over the original around the crotch), good use of highlights on places like the nose (though on the latex, the monochrome one needed to exaggerate them and this could be toned down a little here with some gradients).
And speaking about gradients, I like what you did with those breasts. While Wolfy-Nail did a surpringly good job giving them depth perception for a monochrome drawing, they still have more of it here, which is exactly what coloring should do.

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Yeah... I actually don't know why I'm going all art critic all of a sudden, but hope it helps Wingr should he read this. :P

9.5/10 It's ok. -IGN

Gotta go to hotel.

I want me some of that.

Looks like a chocolate zebra.

I would like to see it colored B&W

But plus to creativity

Elegon said:
I would like to see it colored B&W

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Magic!

Yes aaand... yes.