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ALWD Page 27

Dawn's pendant has somehow weakened Mara to the point of submission, but Mara's trapped by her own tendrils! What will Dawn do now that she's the one in charge? ...

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  • Bobbinord said:
    Nice art, but the feet can have more detail.

    really your concerned about dawns foot not being detailed. its behind 2 tentacles for crying out loud.

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  • h4x0r said:
    wasn't this deleted once. ?

    Yeah and about 4 pages before it, as well as already 4 more pages already made

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  • SHE'S A KANGAROO?!? so did not see that. and is it revenge sex time? i sure hope so hehe.

    Bobbinord said:
    Nice art, but the feet can have more detail.

    They are socks.

    sakuradlyall said:
    really your concerned about dawns foot not being detailed. its behind 2 tentacles for crying out loud.

    corrected him.

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  • h4x0r said:
    wasn't this deleted once. ?

    The deleted ones were smaller and not from the artist's furaffinity I think.

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  • RandomFox11 said:
    She's not.
    You're not a walnut just because I called you that, right?

    You never know. i could be.

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  • sergal239 said:
    SHE'S A KANGAROO?!? so did not see that.

    No, she's not a kangaroo. That was an insult, like calling a dog a mangy mutt.

    She's actually a... Hold on, need to stuff a handful of marbles in my mouth to pronounce this right... "Dorukolorukalai"

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  • Drakath said:
    No, she's not a kangaroo. That was an insult, like calling a dog a mangy mutt.

    She's actually a... Hold on, need to stuff a handful of marbles in my mouth to pronounce this right... "Dorukolorukalai"

    aahhhh A DorukolorukalaiNoodle now i see.... sort of... ok not really.

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  • This artist's style for the faces is all over the place.
    Dawn's muzzle seems to be morphing into all manners of shapes throughout this page. In the first panel, she seems to have a moderately shaped snout. The second, her nose is much shorter along with that Launchpad McQuack chin. Then the final panel, her muzzle has sprung out a good 4 inches.
    I didn't know retractable muzzles were a thing.

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