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Comic Relief - Page 20
Page 20 of a comic I made for Saddle Up 2!
Go easy on him, dragon boy!
And that's the end of part one! SORRY I HAD TO STOP IT RIGHT THERE But I had to trim down my story in order to finish it in time for Saddle Up 2! The second part, which will involve spike topping shining (and then getting greedy and growing larger and more feral mid-fuck) WILL COME OUT BY THE END OF THE YEAR I PROMISE.
Now that you've read this comic though, check out the rest of the comics in Saddle Up 2, the art pack this was made for! Or, download the deluxe pack of it to get the missing pages 17 and 18, as well as the ENTIRE comic in full resolution and lots of other goodies!
DiablodesBurrito
Membernoooooooooooooooooooooooooo. How can it end here of all places?! I feel as though I've just been tempted with the most delicious desert and had it taken from me one bite in.
GarethGobulcoque
MemberIf you only call that first part one bite, I suggest you read through a few more times.
But yeah, this was a damn fun ride, what I've come to expect from braeburned. I'm anxious to see more soon.
fenrir1208
MemberHe has one with both Big Mac and Braeburn getting trained on, one with Pinkie Pie he did for 4chan, and one with Big Mac and Shining Armor.
I agree, he should start doing comics, but he's already swamped enough.
ZiddersRooFurry
MemberWow I loved this. I've had a few experiences when I was younger that had this same feel.
baldarion
MemberI'm all staight but, damn, this comic is hot.
kayla1
Memberspike want?...we ALL want!
Tchikita
MemberI really love Braeburned's casual, relaxed dialog writing. Really adds to the otherwise already great porn.
DiablodesBurrito
MemberIf anybody knows, could you enlighten me onto what is actually included in the deluxe pack? is it part 2? or is it just more single one offs by other artists included? I really wanna know because I'd be absolutely willing to drop $5 on this if it means I get to see spike on shiny continuation.
Pokelova
MemberPart 2 is not in the deluxe pack, sadly. Perhaps Braeburned is saving it for Saddle Up 3.
Runivis
Member"Your guys butts were at my exact eye level for years"
post #635736
Braeburned
MemberThe deluxe pack, as far as content from ME goes, contains two full page spreads of shining and spike fucking (pages 17 and 18, essentially). Part two (a continuation) will happen later!
Braeburned
MemberAnd thanks so much for the kind words guys! Im so glad my approach to comics is something you guys enjoy, and like that guy up there said, I'M REALLY SWAMPED but would LOVE to make comics more often like this. Thanks again!
AlSmith
MemberHot! Gotta love the Equine Endowment love~!
TheKrat
MemberBest friend sex is best sex ;w;
Zanazoth
MemberI get it.
Trained on.
Because the guys ran a train on them.
on a train
lertcon2014
MemberAnyone got an update on when the next part might show up?
Azimuth Elevation
BlockedIDW needs to hire you' you're the best
Rynir
MemberMaybe he just doesn't want to screw his fanbase over by suddenly switching to evil corporate tactics bordering on downright criminal practice.
Rynir
MemberThey got fucked in the caboose.
Braeburned
MemberI've obvously thought about it! But, to be honest, I haven't made actual significant money for myself in a while. I do conventions, and I'll get a little bit of the portion from SU2 donations, but nothing compared to what I'm sure I'd get if monetized this kind of comic more.
But I guess I feel that kind of thing leaves a bad taste in peoples mouths! I want to share these comics, and I want people to love them, and I'd hate to have the good feeling of a comic tainted by the fact that you have to pay to see it, I guess?
For Part Two of this comic, I'll hopefully find a way to make SOME sort of money; I'd never do a paywall, but even just some sort of patreon that's SOLELY for donations, maybe? Because, to by honest, I'm struggling a bit. Working on this comic, Saddle Up in general, along with being a full time student AND constantly traveling to conventions?
I haven't been able to do a commission in months.
Right now, all I can ask people to do is support this art pack, or, if they're really generous, to donate straight to me. I hope I can, in the future, set up a more profitable way of supplying you guys content! Without preventing of limiting publicly posted content, of course. Maybe some sort of teired donation drive to push the full release of Part Two? I dunno. It's tough.
At this point though, I'm still riding on the high of all the positive words I've gotten on this comic. The reception has been incredible, and I could not be happier!
ArdwenDeero
MemberThere's nothing evil about trying to make money using your talents as opposed to letting a bunch of free-loading furries fap to it then move on without a second thought. It takes an enormous amount of time, money, and effort to create a big comic like this. Yeah, free is great, but when you're struggling to make ends meet (which almost EVERYONE is), you're not going to have the time to make such great things for absolutely no reward. The fandom is a business, welcome to corporate America. Money makes the world go round.
You're a better man than I. I think if you love doing it and you get plenty of praise to keep you going, go right ahead. But I wouldn't be cranking out such huge comics for free. Of course you're going to step on some toes when you start asking for something in return for the loads of time and effort you put into your work, but if you explain to people the situation you're in (which most everyone can relate to) and they still wanna bitch, moan, and complain about having to shuck out a few bucks to see their favorite pony porn then they can go fuck themselves. You deserve to see the fruits of your labor. Clearly everyone enjoys your product. Even if half of them aren't willing to pay, you'll still see a shitload who will. And you can still put out a few short freebie comics and standalone pics to placate the fans, if you want. Donations are great, but you should still definitely look into doing something that'll let you turn a profit.
DJ COL-7
MemberI'M. SO. GODDAMN. JEALOUS!!! >_<
Don't get me wrong, I'm happy for you. It just sucks being 27, having only come out of the closet less than a year ago, and STILL a virgin... T~T
Pigu lord
BlockedDude, get a prostitue or something, Jesus.
DJ COL-7
MemberI would (male ofc) if I had money... >_>
I'm working on that though.
Though I'd also rather have a legit boyfriend. I just live in a goddamn hick-town full of disgusting old bearded homophobic fuckers. >_<
Pigu lord
BlockedYou should at least fuck one person so that you can say you're not a virgin. And to get the first time over with, the first time is always the worst because eyou have no idea what you're doing. Unless you get a bf that's also a virgin, and you take you virginities at the same time, then it might be special.
Braeburned
MemberYou should never subject yourself to a horrible first-time experience just to get rid of some label with a completely made up importance. The idea of being a virgin is always used to put other down; Either you have sex to earlier and you're a slut, or you have sex to late and you're a loser. The whole thing is toxic.
The only reason first times usually suck is because they're rushed and because you feel like it's something you HAVE to do to get rid of the virgin label. I've shared a multitude a people's first times, and every single one has been enjoyable because it wasn't rushed or pressured. It was casual, I was already close to them so they were comfortable, and it was great, even if it was a bit giggly and clumsy.
That's exactly the kind of mood I'm trying to portray in this comic. Good, experimental, casual, comfortable, enjoyable first times. Wait as long as you need to to find the right opportunity, but never rush yourself into having a terrible first sexual experience just to get rid of a label with such an imaginary societal importance attached to it. The time will come and you'll be glad you waited!
Pigu lord
BlockedYou know what, I agree. Also PS please hurry on the next part its so cute, it reminds me if my first "real" time with a guy :3
DJ COL-7
MemberYeah, I was just joking with the guy that said I should get an escort. Part of the reason I'm still virginified is because my life sucked, but the bigger reason is I never wanted to just "do it" with someone. I want to develop a real natural relationship first. I've had my heart broken before too though. I always tried to woo the hottest girls in high-school even though I was a fat loser, and one pretended to like me until I asked her on an actual date.
I'd probably have a difficult time hitting up the "gay scene" too though, because I'm actually bisexual, and I read online that a lot of gay guys are just as virulent towards bisexuals as straight guys can be to gays. While I've sometimes fantasized about hooking up with a couple guys at a convention or something, I'd really just rather finish working on myself and find someone I can share a common bond with. I'm like a 4.5 on the Kinsay scale though, so I'd prefer a guy, but a dominant yet non-abusive lady would be nice too.
Sorry for completely derailing the comments section. I didn't expect me being honest about my virgin status would cause so much drama. @~@
user 124950
MemberE621 comments: starts as a compliment and fan hype paridise and turns into the best counseling session I've ever seen online. Good job to you sirs.
Sweets MLP
MemberI can deny it... I giggled at the butt thing.
"Your guys' butts were at my exact eye level for years" I love it XD I really do.
Zerothenightwolf
MemberI cumed too much...now I'm in a sea of my own cum.....\(^w^)/ YAY
SureFire2020
Memberhow could it end it was the best comic i ever readed T.T
Faptastic
MemberMagic!
just a regular horse
MemberWho wouldn't tell you that you are awesome at what you do? Your art is probably the best I, personally, am ever going to see. Braeburned, you are the best!
(Just wanted to say this even though you're unlikely going to ever see it...)
Braeburned
MemberOh shush, I always try to read and respond to as many comments as I can. Thanks a lot dude!
just a regular horse
MemberI forgot to add that in your art I always feel the connection between the characters involved that's how good It is. I can't say this more and it will probably get annoying soon but YOU. ARE. AWSOME!
user 186738
Memberplease do part 2 with spike and s. armor, this is amazing!!!!!!!
A Friendly Fuckboy
MemberWait..... OH I GET IT! IT'S CALLED COMIC RELIEF!
That's. Fucking. Genius.
Mysterie
MemberSPIKE WANT
ChandlerTheOtter
MemberSeriously the best line of the whole comic.
DarkSonic
MemberCan't wait for part 2.
AnonymousMemory
BlockedWhen's part 2 supposed to come out? :P
Riolu117
MemberI have to say I love this! Also I love how you made Spike, he looks adorable and the black hoodie looks great on him. XD
Tible
BlockedI-I wanna feel full
ono
all's I have is ice cream
SilvertailYFF
MemberThat was one of the best dirty mlp comics I've read. Hot stuff! Murrr
xKronikInsomniax0150
MemberDude. This is only Part 1. Part 2 is in the works right now.
High Fidelity
Member...you said, six months ago. Not that I'm trying to pressure the artist, I know this stuff takes time. Just finding the time estimate amusing.
...Hey, Ice cream seems to work for Spike in the show...
Hekate sketch
MemberPeeps, stop asking for more! Seriously, if Braeburned has a lot to do, then it's going to be quite some time. Patience. All good things come with time.
Also, amazing comic. Really love your art style and how it was written.
Tible
BlockedSpike wants ass
I want Spike
o3o
Clickclicker
MemberBrae made spike actually clopable to that amazing
Beepmaster
MemberCLIFFHANGEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRR!
KingMusicManz
Memberguys part two is almost done there are like 3 more pages until brae is done
xxpiexx
Memberyay it coming
xxpiexx
Memberall that came from comic books
TheHalloweenFool
Memberone word... shining booty..
and i say this is one word, because there is not enough time to make them two seperate words. we need that time to keep fapping.
Princesscelestia
MemberThou hast made me wait long enough I demand part 2
sincerely Princess Celestia
Dragolfy1
MemberI'm not really much of a brony, but this art style... <3 <3 <3 <3
Yoshi Lover
MemberI up voted this comment just to make it 69 i feel like a cub
Holmes
MemberMe Gusta
BigBearDaddypls
Blocked*magic!*
Ridley Dragmire
MemberNot just Spike want.
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