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    Inominata

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    Illuminatii said:
    |:/ Doesn't exactly help.

    Start with the faces, they look kinda... flat... next the dude's back part of the head looks kinda weird, even though I can't put my finger on it... then you could do the hair more detailed, same with the background, lastly make more distinguished shadows on the characters...

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    eqgz

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    Illuminatii said:
    What needs fixing??

    You're drawing the rough outlines of shapes rather than understanding the volume of them. Thinking in 2D makes everything you draw seem flat and unconvincing.

    Get a book on basic drawing and anatomy and pay attention to the "cone, box, and cylinder" shapes in the construction of forms.

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    redweasel

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    his face is like "hey this actually feels pretty good!"

    this has better dimensions than most people ever draw in their life. human faces are supposed to be kinda flat anyway. your real problem is that the human's head is too small. remember that the eyes only go up half of the head's height and fill out foreheads fully. it's an egg shape, not a pot with hair on it.

    his hips need more definition. not like girly, but it looks like his pants are levitating like 2 inches away from his butt.

    might want to zoom out some more. the picture would look better with a static border, though you would lose some of the interesting negative spaces the man and vulpix cut out.

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    Illuminatii

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    redweasel said:
    might want to zoom out some more. the picture would look better with a static border, though you would lose some of the interesting negative spaces the man and vulpix cut out.

    Static border? You mean one that imitates the shape of their bodies?

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