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A short flash testing a new way of adding text.

Just click on the textbox to continue. Any feedback would be nice. I'm always willing to hear suggestions on how to improve!

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  • I like it. The text loads in at a really nice speed, and it all responds very quickly. As far as the animation itself goes, his hair and the tuft of fur on his chest moving at different angles and speeds makes it look a little off. His hand looks a bit odd as well, like his wrist is curled way too much. I think it could look a little smoother and more natural if the hand was rotated such that the wrist is more towards him on the fore-side, and the joints of his fingers are facing away from him.

    Of course, these are just my opinions. The more varied and different viewpoints you can get, the better things will get. Over all, great job.

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  • ShiftyMalcontent said:
    I like it. The text loads in at a really nice speed, and it all responds very quickly. As far as the animation itself goes, his hair and the tuft of fur on his chest moving at different angles and speeds makes it look a little off. His hand looks a bit odd as well, like his wrist is curled way too much. I think it could look a little smoother and more natural if the hand was rotated such that the wrist is more towards him on the fore-side, and the joints of his fingers are facing away from him.

    Of course, these are just my opinions. The more varied and different viewpoints you can get, the better things will get. Over all, great job.

    Okay! Thank you! I'll keep that in mind when I work on some more things. I'm glad you took the time to tell me this.

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