european mythology and etc created by posexe
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  • Kasmira3 said:
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    Hey, what is that flying over your head? Oh, it's the joke.

    The relatively bad knock knock joke? Or are you supposed to draw some other parallel to something else? 'Cause I'm not seeing it.

    If the knock knock thing was the joke, then it was poorly constructed, since the person knocking will know who they are (which can be often assumed to be the second part in knock knock jokes), i.e. they would never say "I dunno" unless it's an integral part of the joke. A very simple improvement would be to instead end with "Take a goose" or "Goose who it is".

    Maybe I'm just a bore but this unfortunately fell short due to execution.

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