I'm all for edits, provided the artist has been asked for permission in advance (and sees the final project before it's posted), but I'm not too fond of some of the choices in this one. I'm not an artist myself, but I can still offer some critique and opinions on what would make this look better:

1. Not too keen on the stark contrast of red and blue for the sheets and background, respectively. It's a little jarring to the eye and could be swapped for a different palette or be more muted.

2. The areas where colors blend on the bound girl look strange. Multicolored fur tends to possess some degree of irregularity to it where the colors mesh, which can be conveyed by using jaggedness in the linework (see the right thigh and arm on the original) or should be kept distinct (see the forehead on the sketch, as well as post #548547, which keeps fur colors cleanly separated and just uses shading atop that).

3. White and red nipples. Probably should have colored those and the surrounding areolae pinkish.

Not much and not in great detail, but it's hopefully constructive despite.

#1. I understand the contrast, I was just in a bit of a hurry to finish. :P (red sheets, blue walls, white... stuff, she's just being patriotic )

#2. Colour blending is hard, especially when the original image has some shading on it where the colours are going to be.

#3. yea... I missed that...shit...

THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK!

This coloured version looks amazing-great choices, it really sets this hot piece off.

Something seems off here..

I'm looking to do more if anyone has a pic they want coloured

I DON"T DO:
*male solo
*male/male
*chubby
*scat/watersport
*equine/MLP

That file size is pretty suspicious....

quinpussy said:
That file size is pretty suspicious....

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move along... I'm not evil

some one did a color version of an sketch edit I did long ago and got flag and deleted for it! now some one repost it and then some one else colored it. and its here now WOW! I was just a cringy fan of this artist and did some crappy editions changing the males on it for females. I never thought this would happen. XD the parent of this images is actually an edition!! my mind is blown!. XD the male version is the original one!. XD