vera (frisky ferals and etc) created by sefeiren
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  • Part 2 is a must, this comic is right on par with the last survivor comic series, Please make a part two.

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  • ...its over? This comic has been around for about 4 years now. Its kinda hard to come to terms that its actually over.

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  • I'll be honest... this ending is pretty meh. Hopefully there will be another part, but I'm not holding my breath.

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  • Damn... Love to see the end, but hate to see it go.

    I kinda thought this was only the halfway mark. I had expected like a multi-parter, where we actually see the consequences and events unfold after the fact. (But tbh I just wanted to see kindles dads dick.)

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  • Cynosure said:
    You

    Are milking

    The hell out

    of this

    (Coulda been one/two pages dude :/)

    Cinema 101, Hold on a scene with very little happening to make a small action take on a much larger significance by comparision

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  • It's.... over?.... But.... BUT.... IT WAS SO GOOD! Chant with me now! "Chapter 2 Chapter 2 Chapter 2.... Please?"

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  • What a Wonderful Comic. I really love to see and understand the Stuggle Vera had to go through... i mean put yourself in her place. Your "Mate" just fucks with whoever he wants, your son kinda grows into the same behaviour, Which might just be how male dragons are in this World. But the Females are obvioussly not.

    She needs a way to end the Tyranny of the "Packleader" I mean we don't know how Kindles dad treats the other males in the pack, or the Females there. So she had to go through a inner fight like that and Kindle is just a huge assshit in the beginning and is like "naaaw i don't care how others suffer, just begone".

    Kindle is a insanely egocentric Dragon, even though we are made believe, that Vera is the Bad Bitch here. Think about it. Kindle is the one Person who could overthrow his Father. And he just doesn't give a shit, he doesn't give a shit how his sisters have to suffer, he doesn't care how much his mum suffers because "he didn't want to get involved in the first place anyways". Well Kindle, sometimes you HAVE to get involved, because your mum did probably more for you, than Thistle ever ever did for you. She helped you grow up into a strong Dragon.

    This story is very Well Written and incredibly good at making the So called "hero" look very good, but only if you scratch a bit beneath the surface, it gets better.

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  • KiroLakestrike said:

    She needs a way to end the Tyranny of the "Packleader" I mean we don't know how Kindles dad treats the other males in the pack, or the Females there. So she had to go through a inner fight like that and Kindle is just a huge assshit in the beginning and is like "naaaw i don't care how others suffer, just begone".

    Kindle is a insanely egocentric Dragon, even though we are made believe, that Vera is the Bad Bitch here. Think about it. Kindle is the one Person who could overthrow his Father. And he just doesn't give a shit, he doesn't give a shit how his sisters have to suffer, he doesn't care how much his mum suffers because "he didn't want to get involved in the first place anyways". Well Kindle, sometimes you HAVE to get involved, because your mum did probably more for you, than Thistle ever ever did for you. She helped you grow up into a strong Dragon.

    This story is very Well Written and incredibly good at making the So called "hero" look very good, but only if you scratch a bit beneath the surface, it gets better.

    Judging from clips given, she WANTED Kindle to be the dragon to surpass his father, however we are also made to beleive a huge amount of disagreements in how Kindle actually wanted to live his life and what she was trying to get him to be didn't match up. He might not have it in him to WANT to be the ruler he needs to be, and the father is made out to be the 'I will fight to keep this' Person.

    Lack of given info on this subject does not exactly help matters ANY. Judging by how Kindle gives the 'you wouldn't bother to find me unless you wanted something' line leads me to beleive that Vera was prone to long spouts of simply not caring after he left, or is a included reason. Put that and the fact he hates his father means she may have been putting out the 'did something to his sisters' thing she mentions.

    However, Vera gets several saving graces given a 'stacked deck' entry: the fact that she instantly recognizes the wooden dragon in his room and is actually appreciative of the fact he kept it all this time. Which allows us glimpses of what exactly may have went on previously and the fact she realizes how splintered things have gotten for her specifically. The fact she even sought him specifically out even when ANY OTHER DRAGON in secret she chose to go out and LOOK FOR Kindle. I'd add more but my usual internet posting limit is 3 paragraphs as a personal rule.

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  • The consequences of the mating are as follows:

    No child
    Essentially, Kindle will only have the emotional scars of screwing his mother and Vera will have the heartache of knowing she can never reconcile her relationship with Kindle.

    Female child
    Kindle's dad would see foul play is going on and, most likely, come to a correct conclusion about how and why his wife (who he hasn't mated with is who knows how long) got pregnant. This could cause further problems between husband and wife with the possibility of Kindle getting dragged into it. Kindle will never have the same freedom again because his father will see him as a possible threat.

    Male child
    This is, by far, the most interesting possibly, and worst case scenario for Kindle. It would yeald similar problems as a female child would, but with the possibility of a civil war breaking out. Vera would have to hide the child until he's big enough to take down Kindle's father. Kindle would be targeted by his father, if he finds out, and would have to seek refuge. This would likely bring mother and son together again with the gryphon around as well. From there... well, I'll let imagination play out.

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  • I don’t really feel sorry for her. She was kindve a bitch to her son. Growing up with parents that treated me like just something on the side I can kindve see where Kindle gets his feelings. Good for him

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