good one! i really want to give dawn a second chance. in the next, try to make text a bit more visible. It was a little hard to understand a few words ^^'

True_Tchelow said:
good one! i really want to give dawn a second chance. in the next, try to make text a bit more visible. It was a little hard to understand a few words ^^'

Heh. I'll pass it on, but I'm not Zhan.

Dawn, you did get jailed (in this timeline), and you are at least somewhat sorry (ditto) so that you got caught while having your plans foiled is a good thing (ditto).

Other than that I'd edit the dialogue, though, this is super cute and nice.

I am glad to see that even certain artist understand that under the circumstances she deserves a second chance. Hoping to see her in the sequel.