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Page 3. During the night, Ayn likes to dance. There's a lot more I wanted to elaborate on here, but I tried my best to whittle it down to the simple reasons she likes it, and that it's no secret. A lot of the general populace likes having a leader figure so 'base' in wants and needs.

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'Red Princess' is a short, 6-page character spotlight comic funded by my Patreon supporters, focusing on Ayn Miyur, Princess of Siania. The idea behind this was to flesh out her personality, thoughts, relationships, and a little bit of backstory, to push her as a more whole, 3 dimensional OC than just eye candy, though she is that, too.

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  • I'm a princess who cares little for politics, less for the religion my family's rule is based in, and I like to strip and have sex with random well built hotties whenever the mood strikes me.

    Could just skip the monalog and sum it up with "I'm a bad girl forced to act good to save face" xD Still funny. Haven't seen internal dialog like this with a character like this since redrusker. Let's just hope it doesn't get... repetitive...

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  • "When I make it who I am . . . I'm wanted."

    Isn't that the kind of saying that makes people feel prostitution is good for the prostitutes because it gives them a sense of worth?

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  • Bias said:
    Could just skip the monalog and sum it up with "I'm a bad girl forced to act good to save face" xD Still funny.

    Not quite. She doesn't act good or save face at all. More akin to "I was told to act good by a bunch of dicks, so instead I'll be myself, which is kind of bad." Supposed to be kind of like this is one thing they can't control on her, so she's getting back at them and gets away with it because of her position.

    Hopefully it makes more sense in the future pages. I'm always self-conscious about my writing.

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  • fluff-kevlar said:
    Hopefully it makes more sense in the future pages. I'm always self-conscious about my writing.

    Huh, well if you're a self-conscious writer I'll keep my ideas and opinions to myself. Last thing I want to do is break someone else's story and no reason to get downvoted by you again.

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  • fluff-kevlar said:
    Not quite. She doesn't act good or save face at all. More akin to "I was told to act good by a bunch of dicks, so instead I'll be myself, which is kind of bad." Supposed to be kind of like this is one thing they can't control on her, so she's getting back at them and gets away with it because of her position.

    Hopefully it makes more sense in the future pages. I'm always self-conscious about my writing.

    hey you never answered my question on the last page... which I'm really lost with plot lines right now. try playing mine craft and learning of 2b2t.

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  • foxleader said:
    hey you never answered my question on the last page... which I'm really lost with plot lines right now. try playing mine craft and learning of 2b2t.

    nobody gives a fuck about Minecraft or the oldest server fuck off

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  • fluff-kevlar said:
    Not quite. She doesn't act good or save face at all. More akin to "I was told to act good by a bunch of dicks, so instead I'll be myself, which is kind of bad." Supposed to be kind of like this is one thing they can't control on her, so she's getting back at them and gets away with it because of her position.

    Hopefully it makes more sense in the future pages. I'm always self-conscious about my writing.

    How does that not make sense already? I can totally see how wanting to be yourself (even if you are a "bad" person) makes sense after a lifetime of having assholes tell you what to do. That's my life on a nutshell.

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  • Salemcripple said:
    How does that not make sense already? I can totally see how wanting to be yourself (even if you are a "bad" person) makes sense after a lifetime of having assholes tell you what to do. That's my life on a nutshell.

    Sometimes, being 'yourself' is a bad thing.
    You don't tell a serial killer to be himself - that would cause murders.
    That is particularly uncommon, though, so w/e.

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  • Salemcripple said:
    How does that not make sense already? I can totally see how wanting to be yourself (even if you are a "bad" person) makes sense after a lifetime of having assholes tell you what to do. That's my life on a nutshell.

    If not done carefully "Showing off a bad side to rebel against parents/guardians/figures of authority" can become very trope-ish.

    Personally I'd be more entertained if she was showing off her body and acting aloof to her duties as a way to bolster the morale of her people. A person in a seat of high power acting more like a common citizen with feelings and desires could make her more relate-able to the populace, but if overdone it could start making it hard to believe that they have any reason to respect her.

    As far as Fluff's comics go they are far less offensive in the writing department than the vast majority of other big furry comics. Like that recent and abhorrent one about cuckolding and alleged pedophilia, not to name names.

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  • Antallo said:
    If not done carefully "Showing off a bad side to rebel against parents/guardians/figures of authority" can become very trope-ish.

    Personally I'd be more entertained if she was showing off her body and acting aloof to her duties as a way to bolster the morale of her people. A person in a seat of high power acting more like a common citizen with feelings and desires could make her more relate-able to the populace, but if overdone it could start making it hard to believe that they have any reason to respect her.

    As far as Fluff's comics go they are far less offensive in the writing department than the vast majority of other big furry comics. Like that recent and abhorrent one about cuckolding and alleged pedophilia, not to name names.

    Don't know why you got down voted for this, but I up voted you out of oblivion. Maybe it just a difference in personalities. Like I said, I've always been more of the "brooding" type. And even at 35 years old, I find myself rebelling similar to her (just not in a sexual way). In my every day life, I'm a fine upstanding law abiding citizen, on the weekend though? Get me around my "car buddies" and... let's just say the parking lot at the local Walmart is full of burnout marks for a reason.

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  • foxleader said:
    hey you never answered my question on the last page... which I'm really lost with plot lines right now. try playing mine craft and learning of 2b2t.

    hahahahaha, my god, dude. stay golden.

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  • This is the dumbest comment section I've ever seen. 2/3 of the people here have already forgotten since the last page that she's a literal deity.

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