Perfect ending to a perfect comic <3

I came to hate, i failed.

I ship Shining Spike so hard

Whelp, I put the total damage done at some redecorating needed, a new bed, new sheets and maybe a new hoody. Pretty good going for one mating session.

space123123 said:
About time

It was like 2 posts a day, and you're still complaining?

This comic have been something fantastic. Words can't fully explain how i felt, even because english is not my language but i'll try to say something. What i loved most were these two young friends that thanks to their friendship let themselfs go and simply shared pleasure each other discovering themselfs. Good story, good characters, wonderful drawings (artist opinion). I'll remember this story :)

MAGIC JIZZ >0< YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS

Also, sequel time!!! >:3

An awesome comic and an awesome story.
Braeburned. You are a legend

Braeburned: Making horse dick Actually Pretty Hot since 201X.

very very good you did a good job

LSD_XIII said:
Also, sequel time!!! >:3

I think it ligit be the comic all over again.

I don't MLP yiff. This is the ONLY exception though. It was well made and I SHIP THEM TOO MUCH.

rip shinning armor ass and sheets

most amazing and hot comic ever!!!!

Well crap. Someone else is makeing me like MLP related things more.

I have to admit that was actually a really good comic to read well worth the wait for both parts

By FAR one of the best comics out there!

hm, Brae, are these scratches on the ceiling something that you thought of while drawing the last pages? i can't see them be shown to be done anywhere in the comic.

This... I'm a straight man, and I clopped to this several times. Good job!

GOOD JOB ON THE COMIC I WANT TO SEE MORE IN THE FUTURE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND ILL KEEP THE BITS COMING

Shingen said:
hm, Brae, are these scratches on the ceiling something that you thought of while drawing the last pages? i can't see them be shown to be done anywhere in the comic.

This comic takes place over the course of a couple hours, so while I didn't explicitly draw the panels where spike arched his back/neck at times and hit the ceiling with his spikes, I wanted to imply that probably still happened at some point! I did the same thing with one of shining's orgasms. After spike's been fucking him for a while, spike turns him over (pg. 38) and we see, whoops, shining already came all over the sheets at some point from this ordeal.

Make another series man

Braeburned, even as someone who's not a dedicated MLP fan, I can honestly say this has been one of the most engaging (and just outright sweet and cute) smut comics I've read in a very long while. I'm sure as heck buying this one.

Bang up job, man. (´∀｀)♡

awww no reaction from Twi?

Brae, thank you so much for this incredible comic, loved every bit of it <3

honestly not into the friendship is magic thing but..was a well made comic, i went to glance and move on and kinda enjoyed the character development..well done

LOVED IIIIIIT!! Good job brae, good job

On a meta note, I find it pretty amusing to see the comments about users not liking (or blacklisting) MLP or gay art, but still openly enjoying the comic/making exceptions/looking up other MLP stuff/whatever. Hell, I still hold Braeburned responsible for getting me into male/male art by virtue of being that damned good and, from an outside perspective, a cool dude in general, so I can understand why they would.

So, pants off to you, Brae. You fucking well earned it.

Derangedrake said:
I came to hate, i failed.

I bet you came though.

:v

That was so cute, 😍😍😍😍😍❤️💛💚💙💜

heh. nice to see i'm not the only one who doesn't mind laying around in the mess afterwards.

Derangedrake said:
I came to hate, i failed.

I Didn't come to hate.... But i still hated MLP..... I hate it slightly less now.

I've never watched MLP but this is one of the best things I have ever read and these two are almost as good together as OTP Toothless&Hiccup. Absolutely Fabulous, Brae! I wish I could spare more than 5 bucks for such quality.

Brea thank you for this comic. It was cute hot and believeable. I loved every second of it. And as usual I can't fault you on any of it. You sir are a god amongst comic writers and I look forward to your next one

This is by far the best comic I have ever read on here. It's definately in my personal top 10.

back on page 20 what ever happen with the pony that was casting magic or is that part in the extras

The only thing I'm missing is seeing that knot being pulled out :(

This fucking guy. I can get the first part. He drew a comic where two guys are having their first gay experience together, and it's awkward and funny and hot, and all the dialogue (and the sum of how the characters emote and communicate with each other) is believable, great. That makes sense. The scene feels right, it feels real and immediate, and what sets it apart from so many other comics seems to be the dialogue, so obviously that's what's doing most of the work?

And then in the second part he has fifteen pages of almost nothing except dick going into ass, with one character mostly just moaning and another saying nothing at all, and he *still* makes it really exciting and hot. What the fuck. Is this guy Gay Jesus or what?

Zermelane said:
And then in the second part he has fifteen pages of almost nothing except dick going into ass, with one character mostly just moaning and another saying nothing at all, and he *still* makes it really exciting and hot. What the fuck. Is this guy Gay Jesus or what?

Just like the first part, it's perfectly real to life. When sex gets going, it really gets going. And going. And going.

So fucking insane batshit awesome!!! :)

outofplace said:
back on page 20 what ever happen with the pony that was casting magic or is that part in the extras

That was Shining, using magic to clean up the mess of jizz they both made. He offers to do the same spell at the end of part two, but they're both too exhausted to do much other than recover and cuddle.

why do i imagine someone Reading "The End, Thanks for Reading" and everyone just Stands up and Claps like in a Theatre?
hmm, eitherway. maybe we get to see the Other site, with Twilight.

Braeburned, this needs a follow up. Something along the lines of Twi walking in to check on Shining because she heard noises.

alfurr said:
Braeburned, this needs a follow up. Something along the lines of Twi walking in to check on Shining because she heard noises.

There's actually another few pages to this comic where that pretty much happens. He just hasn't posted them here. I'm guessing you'd have to pay for those.

I never thought that someday it will tell, but this comic even steeper "All aboard"

It's not allowing me to view the link in the description.

Braeburned can you pleas put posted by maker into all your future posts

Although I very much appreciate the fine amount of sex in this comic, I would like to talk about this on a critical stand point. You see, the majority of porn I have seen is down right terrible either because of the artwork or the story line/premise. However, I have come across art pieces like this comic that I absolutely adore! Ever sense I stumbled upon e621 I have found quit a bit of good art, explicit or not. Usually if I like it, it's because I like BOTH the art and story line/premise. What's unique about braeburn is the realism that he incorporates into his comics. I absolutely love the dialog and the art is very beautiful, especially the shading. Even though I have not had sex with this kind of "passion" I still get the realistic feeling off of the characters, the dialog, and they're actions. The amount of realistic dialog in porn is very few. I have seen the previous comments and had read the comments from braeburn about getting inspiration from his real life experiences, and that is pretty cool to say the least. Braeburn, whoever your partner(s) is is extremely lucky to have someone or have done it with someone as sweet and as generous as you if this is based off of your experiences. Not only that, but your art and story is fantastic! My point is is that I love this comic and that I appreciate the good work you do for us. Thank you, braeburn.

P.S.
I literally can’t read or watch normal porn anymore because of the lack of good dialog. What have you done to me braeburn, now I have standards for PORN!!!

And Twilight never suspected a thing. The End.

But in all seriousness this story was perfect, if not completely amazing.Its obvious how much effort went into making this.I hope we'll be able to see more content from you like this.

I've always loved Braes comics for how much the characters care about each other. There's too much "rapey" stuff out there and not enough stuff with passion and love.

Okay, lemme try this again- Braeburned, you are a true god among porn artists. God damn, I like your stuff on a level I simply can't express. And I never thought Shining Spike was awesome until this comic. Bless your beautiful gay-porn-drawing heart!

DireKitsune said:
And Twilight never suspected a thing. The End.

You should buy the full comic and have your mind blown, buddy. :P

Braeburned's best comic to date. 10/10

I JUST realized who made this....... I'm going to have to take a looksie!

Jesus, you sold me Spike Armor
Sounds cool and cute

awesome comic really enjoyed it!

Excellent work, Braeburned. The artwork, dialogue (including sfx) was awesome. And to anyone whom hasn't yet purchased this comic...it's well worth the money spent.

Bruhtato said:
Perfect ending to a perfect comic <3

Oh yes! Totally cute and totally HOT at the same time.

Great ending! Thank you, gay horse!

I started reading this expecting to jerk off, but I stopped because the plot is good and the whole thing is honestly pretty cute.

This was great!

HDplayer said:
why do i imagine someone Reading "The End, Thanks for Reading" and everyone just Stands up and Claps like in a Theatre?
hmm, eitherway. maybe we get to see the Other site, with Twilight.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z6CRftD1svM

What do you use to do all your art? I mean by the software and if you use a graphics tablet, and if so, which one? I'm trying to start my own comic. It's neither explicit or anything like your comics, it's actually inspired by Calvin and Hobbes. Sense the comic I'm starting is so simplistic I am thinking of getting the Wacom Intuos Draw CTL490DW Digital Drawing and Graphics Tablet. It's affordable and the #1 best seller on Amazon.

I'd like to nominate this comic as a national treasure.

The chaos in the last scene is great

LittleGuppy said:
What do you use to do all your art? I mean by the software and if you use a graphics tablet, and if so, which one? I'm trying to start my own comic. It's neither explicit or anything like your comics, it's actually inspired by Calvin and Hobbes. Sense the comic I'm starting is so simplistic I am thinking of getting the Wacom Intuos Draw CTL490DW Digital Drawing and Graphics Tablet. It's affordable and the #1 best seller on Amazon.

Oh, I use Paint Tool SAI, and an older wacom model, the small Intuos Pro 5 I believe. But honestly, if you're looking for a first tablet, I wouldn't recommend spending more than $50-60, and the "Draw" is honestly a super cheapo model that seems pretty overpriced.

I've got a bunch of friends with the Monoprice 10 x 6.25-inch Graphic Drawing Tablet, which runs around $35-40 and, while feeling a little plastic-y, has WAY more features than the Draw and works just as well as a $150+ wacom. Also, look for Huion models as well! They've got some popular high quality $50 options as well.

Braeburned said:
Oh, I use Paint Tool SAI, and an older wacom model, the small Intuos Pro 5 I believe. But honestly, if you're looking for a first tablet, I wouldn't recommend spending more than $50-60, and the "Draw" is honestly a super cheapo model that seems pretty overpriced.

I've got a bunch of friends with the Monoprice 10 x 6.25-inch Graphic Drawing Tablet, which runs around $35-40 and, while feeling a little plastic-y, has WAY more features than the Draw and works just as well as a $150+ wacom. Also, look for Huion models as well! They've got some popular high quality $50 options as well.

Thanks for the advice! You just saved me from spending too much money on an overpriced graphics tablet. I'm currently attending a Digital Graphics class at Tulsa Tech and my teacher is letting us use the graphics tablets and I love it WAY better than a mouse. I actually got to do a little bit of practice and it's turning out great design wise. Like I said, it's very simplistic so I didn't need some $500 tablet that can stop time and train a monkey or anything like that. And as for the software, I was looking for something that didn't burn a hole in my wallet like Adobe Illustrator CC that has this stupid monthly payment. Paint Tool SAI looks very promising! I checked it out and if it's capable of creating this comic then the simple comic I'm wanting to do will be easy peesy lemon squeezey! Not only that, but it might come in handy for any other project I might come up with! None the less, You're advice was very helpful. Thank you! Btw, I'm just doing comics, I'm arriving to be a YouTuber! I have a gaming channel called Platys Play and an older channel called ThePlatyKing. Check it out if you want! Thanks again! Can't wait to see what's in store for us!

I know it isn't exactly original, so I know I'm not special in saying this, but I logged in just so I could comment. I came here to say that this is, hands down, the best comic I have ever read. And for me, that's putting it up against the Oversexed Eeveelutions comic, and Dog Night Christmas, both of which are some of the best ever written. I just turned 18 this past Friday, September 16, and as soon as I can figure out how without going through my parents, I'm going to buy this comic, knowing that I have most of it for free, right here.

This comic... I think it's so good because it's so relatable... Like, this is exactly how I'd imagine it to be if me and one of my best friends just... Suddenly decided to bang out of nowhere. The atmosphere, the dialogue...

Of course, sadly, none of us would cum such amazing, thick jizz or have horsecocks, knotted dicks nor would any of us become twice their size... But still.

Guy, I'm straight and this is turning me on. What the FUCK!?

I'm in love with this whole damn comic

I ended up buying this! Not really a brony, nor do I purchase much physical smut, so that's saying something.
Gotta say, it's real nice. Good quality print, a few nice extras. Even signed. <3
Now I just have to hope no one ever finds it under my bed. 8D

I hope to hecking god that Braeburn does more Spike art, this was GOLD <3 And adorbs~

Oh boy that was hot.

MAGIC JIZZ

holy shit.

Masterpiece

Awe it's cute ❤❤

evilscotsman12 said:
Whelp, I put the total damage done at some redecorating needed, a new bed, new sheets and maybe a new hoody. Pretty good going for one mating session.

And probably a new behind

This makes me angry because I doubt ill ever be able to make something so good.

I would so love if you took the time to revisit this comic and make it so spike doesn't stop after he notices the nibble and possibly continue for some time more, possibly à few more orgasms, possibly even a page where twilight takes a peek in the room