christopher and nora created by zummeng
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  • "Wait, after hours of contemplation, let me find the elixir of (dick-shrinking/cunt-growth/super-stretchiness/whatever-you-get-the-idea...) which didn't occur to me until just now!"

    I want to be wrong.

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  • shunka_warakin said:
    "Wait, after hours of contemplation, let me find the elixir of (dick-shrinking/cunt-growth/super-stretchiness/whatever-you-get-the-idea...) which didn't occur to me until just now!"

    I want to be wrong.

    My money's on there being a whole other courtesan in that cabinet, also named Nora.

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  • fractalmaximus said:
    My money's on there being a whole other courtesan in that cabinet, also named Nora.

    "...Always carry a spare, in case the first one splits."?!

    But no, she's been acting like she can handle him since day one of meeting him (kind of interesting how this comic compressed multiple days early on) so I'm a little frowny at the dialogue here making it seem like she really doesn't know.

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  • Into each and every life, there comes a supreme challenge...

    Who will emerge from this trial victorious and triumphant?

    Taking all bets. My money is on Nora.

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  • shunka_warakin said:
    "Wait, after hours of contemplation, let me find the elixir of (dick-shrinking/cunt-growth/super-stretchiness/whatever-you-get-the-idea...) which didn't occur to me until just now!"

    I want to be wrong.

    I think he meant the hours as in all the way since she started talking about makin it up to him.
    Not "we have been laying here and trying for hours".

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  • itisi said:
    I think he meant the hours as in all the way since she started talking about makin it up to him.
    Not "we have been laying here and trying for hours".

    probably, but i suppose if i were her i would've started thinking about the way to handle that dick as soon as i saw it too, so shunka_warakin's point stands.

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  • shunka_warakin said:
    "Wait, after hours of contemplation, let me find the elixir of (dick-shrinking/cunt-growth/super-stretchiness/whatever-you-get-the-idea...) which didn't occur to me until just now!"

    I want to be wrong.

    I'll bet it's a potion of super stretchiness.

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  • shunka_warakin said:
    "Wait, after hours of contemplation, let me find the elixir of (dick-shrinking/cunt-growth/super-stretchiness/whatever-you-get-the-idea...) which didn't occur to me until just now!"

    I want to be wrong.

    Check the title page, we've known from the start

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  • ssgtfmstr said:
    Check the title page, we've known from the start

    Of course we have.

    It's just the dialogue seems foolish on HER part given her previous assurance that she could manage it.

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  • shunka_warakin said:
    But no, she's been acting like she can handle him since day one of meeting him (kind of interesting how this comic compressed multiple days early on) so I'm a little frowny at the dialogue here making it seem like she really doesn't know.

    To be TOTALLY FAIR, if we figure the scrub didn't take that long, and acknowledge the puddle between the bath and the bed, we can assume that it hasn't been all that long since she was actually introduced to her task. Of course she's going to have been insisting she can take it, she's a courtesan. It's literally her job.

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  • fractalmaximus said:
    To be TOTALLY FAIR, if we figure the scrub didn't take that long, and acknowledge the puddle between the bath and the bed, we can assume that it hasn't been all that long since she was actually introduced to her task. Of course she's going to have been insisting she can take it, she's a courtesan. It's literally her job.

    You know, that's valid. And she's a female hyena, and 'back down' isn't really in their vocabulary (and that seems in keeping with the character to date!). It just struck me as a 'Seriously? This is only NOW occuring to you?' line, and normally I wouldn't mind except the rest of the dialogue has been such a delight that I found it really jarring.

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  • shunka_warakin said:
    You know, that's valid. And she's a female hyena, and 'back down' isn't really in their vocabulary (and that seems in keeping with the character to date!). It just struck me as a 'Seriously? This is only NOW occuring to you?' line, and normally I wouldn't mind except the rest of the dialogue has been such a delight that I found it really jarring.

    It could also be that she's known the entire time, put it off to tease him and is playing it off as "I just thought of it" to seem more playful and spontaneous.

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  • slapwhap said:
    It could also be that she's known the entire time, put it off to tease him and is playing it off as "I just thought of it" to seem more playful and spontaneous.

    Another valid interpretation.

    Thanks all of you who tossed input on this at me. I am usually used to seeing VERY high quality writing from Zummeng and I guess I was just put out because of my own interpretation of it. I appreciate seeing you guys' views.

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