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  • Welp. At least he’s honest, realistic, and upfront about this.
    Probably hurts like hell on a hot summer day but he has to do it.

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  • If he puts his, er, paw down on that then they may not be under his roof for long. Or maybe he means he acknowledges it and won't actively oppose it - just that he can't countenance it.

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  • This is probably the best conclusion he could have weird without it getting weird.

    These are his children. His babies. The children he held after their birth, watched take their first steps and speak for the first time. He still sees those little babies when he looks at them.

    And he's supposed to be ok with his little babies engaging in such activity?

    Edit: Take note of the faint shift to his cheeks under his eyes. He's been weeping over this.

    And people crucified this man in the beginning of the story.

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  • This does make sense, it sucks, but it makes sense. Even though the twins have a very loving relationship if it gets out to the public it can ruin their lives and possibly end up with either them or Keith in jail, or all three of them. He’s just trying to do what he thinks is best and protect them from long term harm, even if it will hurt them in the short term.

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  • krosis said:
    Idiot, however, everything was going to this, as usual...

    Idiot?

    It's the most responsible decision he could make, outside of straight up splitting them up for good. But that'd 100% end with him losing them both.

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  • He cannot support this, but that doesn't mean he has to condemn it.

    "Suppose you throw the coin enough times, Raziel. Suppose one day... it lands on its edge." - Kain

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  • He’s in total protective dad mode! He’s hoping to fix a mess he’s partially responsible for creating (teenage hormones being the other).

    He’s also finally grown big boy balls to deal with it, but will he have the skills necessary to make it work for all of them?

    So many things are on the line here: the kids desire to be this physically intimate; the social, community and legal challenges if this gets beyond them (and we can’t leave out Jayden or Morrisa’s involvement); And if it continues.., and offspring occur?

    The hope of the universe hinges on Keith’s love and efforts.

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  • This is really emotional (major props to the artist & author), but I can't help but see Ricardo when I look at Keith turning around
    it's probably just me..

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  • PurpleDragon2020 said:
    If he puts his, er, paw down on that then they may not be under his roof for long. Or maybe he means he acknowledges it and won't actively oppose it - just that he can't countenance it.

    Countenance actually means face : )

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  • bluestreamexe said:
    Welp. At least he’s honest, realistic, and upfront about this.
    Probably hurts like hell on a hot summer day but he has to do it.

    I don't think they're in Summer school.

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  • Cant help but think the emphasis put onto that cheek fluff implies some crying at some point.
    Hmmmmm.

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  • On one hand... I feel bad for Keith... like... I really do...But on the other... If he confronts the siblings and tells them no... I'm predicting they won't stay long seeing how attached they are to each other...

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  • Well then, I have a feeling Keith's rational and well meaning criticism that the twins are gonna have to face in the inevitable conversation were going to get here eventually is going to be really interesting if done right.

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  • cyclone said:
    This does make sense, it sucks, but it makes sense. Even though the twins have a very loving relationship if it gets out to the public it can ruin their lives and possibly end up with either them or Keith in jail, or all three of them. He’s just trying to do what he thinks is best and protect them from long term harm, even if it will hurt them in the short term.

    You know what really sucks, like to the point it's outrageous. Finding out having sex with your sibling in the States of Colorado, Nevada, Montana, Idaho and Michigan, can get you Life in Prison.

    Fucking Life.

    For falling in love with the wrong person.

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  • Geeze looks like backup plan B it is though realistically you can't expect Keith to be cool with it

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  • zanazoth said:
    Idiot?

    It's the most responsible decision he could make, outside of straight up splitting them up for good. But that'd 100% end with him losing them both.

    What prevented him from supporting them? In recent years, he has done nothing but run away from problems by washing them down with booze. The children were alone in the background, but when they found something that was important to them, he turned on the father mode. I would say it's selfish.
    And anyway, what's the problem? - he could be happy for the twins, and not make a tragedy out of it. I would have done so in his place, and would have apologized to them.

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  • The real question is, will seb and sarah still be there when they get back? Or will the waiting and doubts of (what they see as a drunk passed out father) cause them to just leave in fear of what he would do.

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  • I love the detail of his fur being matted where he was crying. I'm also glad he is thinking through this and not immediately disowning them. I think he's making the right choice

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  • Oh no... Oh Keith, you know whatchya gotta do but you're not even sure you have the strength to do it. Really excited for the next page now. Like, he knows they're fucking, he knows he can't support that, but he also wants to hold on to the last vestige that was his wife. We don't know what happened to her (unless my stupid ass missed a detail in a previous comic, in which case please tell me so I can go back and look), but he obviously sees her still in his kids and it's breaking him to even think about disowning them for exploring one another. Yes ik they're well past "exploration" but you know what I mean.

    I've been with this series since Monday Mornings and honestly thought it was a one off wincest comic, but seeing what this series has become nowadays has brought such a huge grin to my face and I always love seeing a new page published either here or on Inkbunny. You keep up the good work, and don't let the bad shit get you down. That goes for anyone reading this comment, don't let all the rotten and horrible shit bring you down. You're loved and appreciated by somebody out there, even if they're just a random internet person thinking he's philosophical by typing this long af message on a furry porn site. :)

    Edit: Before anyone else comments a link to 23 pages ago, I already know. I went looking around ten or fifteen minutes after I originally posted this.

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  • Well, he didn't say he will throw them out. He just won't support it.

    There might be a chance he let them do their thing as long as he doesn't have to hear or see it.

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  • colinkade said:
    I love the detail of his fur being matted where he was crying. I'm also glad he is thinking through this and not immediately disowning them. I think he's making the right choice

    Yap. If this were a real scenario you'd be right. This is porn tho, porn with a story. They've only been fucking for 5 days and teenage hormones are a bitch. Before their first fuck, they didn't seem to have any romantic feelings. He's right to put a damper on something that's already gone out of control, lifelong consequences for a few days of nutting

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  • krosis said:
    What prevented him from supporting them? In recent years, he has done nothing but run away from problems by washing them down with booze. The children were alone in the background, but when they found something that was important to them, he turned on the father mode. I would say it's selfish.
    And anyway, what's the problem? - he could be happy for the twins, and not make a tragedy out of it. I would have done so in his place, and would have apologized to them.

    I think Keith may have been running on auto pilot as to raising Seb and Sera as long as everything seemed to be running smoothly, the kids were doing OK in school, not getting in trouble apparently he thought all was OK and allowed himself to drown his grief in the bottle with that rationale. IIRC he does make mention to Jayden about not even considering getting them their own rooms obviously not even considering Seb and Sera might get with each other. Now that it's become in your face obvious his initial reaction is going to be overcorrect to a degree into responsible dad mode particularly in light of it's not even 24 hours after he's had his failings as a father shoved in his face by opening then door to check on the noises( Sera's reaction of thinking she saw Keith in the doorway) and seeing Seb basking in the immediate afterglow with Sera's legs wrapped tightly around him.

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  • sirmalo said:
    Well, he didn't say he will throw them out. He just won't support it.

    There might be a chance he let them do their thing as long as he doesn't have to hear or see it.

    I think deep down he wants to support them and is happy for them ("Regardless how I feel"), but he has to be the protective father first. That's why he was in tears recently, not because this situation is overwhelming (he already had time to process before Jayden arrived) but because he has to be the bad guy for the twins sake.

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  • garths said:
    I think Keith may have been running on auto pilot as to raising Seb and Sera as long as everything seemed to be running smoothly, the kids were doing OK in school, not getting in trouble apparently he thought all was OK and allowed himself to drown his grief in the bottle with that rationale.

    It sounds like he treated them like plants/things. - Fed, threw a couple of bucks, and forgot for a while. To me, then, his words about loving them sound even more hypocritical.

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  • solarium said:
    Oh no... Oh Keith, you know whatchya gotta do but you're not even sure you have the strength to do it. Really excited for the next page now. Like, he knows they're fucking, he knows he can't support that, but he also wants to hold on to the last vestige that was his wife. We don't know what happened to her (unless my stupid ass missed a detail in a previous comic, in which case please tell me so I can go back and look)

    Keith admitted she's dead here
    https://e621.net/posts/4011299
    Presumably from this car accident
    https://e621.net/posts/3731277

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  • solarium said:
    Oh no... Oh Keith, you know whatchya gotta do but you're not even sure you have the strength to do it. Really excited for the next page now. Like, he knows they're fucking, he knows he can't support that, but he also wants to hold on to the last vestige that was his wife. We don't know what happened to her (unless my stupid ass missed a detail in a previous comic, in which case please tell me so I can go back and look), but he obviously sees her still in his kids and it's breaking him to even think about disowning them for exploring one another. Yes ik they're well past "exploration" but you know what I mean.

    I've been with this series since Monday Mornings and honestly thought it was a one off wincest comic, but seeing what this series has become nowadays has brought such a huge grin to my face and I always love seeing a new page published either here or on Inkbunny. You keep up the good work, and don't let the bad shit get you down. That goes for anyone reading this comment, don't let all the rotten and horrible shit bring you down. You're loved and appreciated by somebody out there, even if they're just a random internet person thinking he's philosophical by typing this long af message on a furry porn site. :)

    https://e621.net/posts/3671644?pool_id=28826 <-- It starts here, consider navigating through the Pool so you can be sure you're all caught up? --> https://e621.net/pools/28826

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  • muddypaws said:
    He’s in total protective dad mode! He’s hoping to fix a mess he’s partially responsible for creating (teenage hormones being the other).

    He’s also finally grown big boy balls to deal with it, but will he have the skills necessary to make it work for all of them?

    So many things are on the line here: the kids desire to be this physically intimate; the social, community and legal challenges if this gets beyond them (and we can’t leave out Jayden or Morrisa’s involvement); And if it continues.., and offspring occur?

    The hope of the universe hinges on Keith’s love and efforts.

    I get that many people just leave comments not expecting to get replies, but the topic of pregnancy has already been addressed on several other pages. BK has explicitly stated that it's not gonna happen.

    Also, since we're taking a very realistic perspective on incest, even if it were on the table, BK would make sure we know it's something to dread rather than eagerly expect (no pun intended). Not just because they're probably not ready for the responsibility, but also because their theoretical child would be at high risk for fatal/debilitating genetic disorders. Like yeah, I get ya, breeding is super hot! But maybe this is not a good time for it.

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  • So now he decides he needs to be their father? What a joke he is.

    Keith has in a single sentence decided that he is going to be alone. It's been implied that Jayden was thrown out of her home for being sexually active and her family not endorsing it, I doubt she will stand with him on this, and trying to break up the twins will just force them to leave.

    Keith is finally doing what he should have done from the start and it is way to late, his reward will be that he will be entirely alone.

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  • Hot damn though the amount of hate to Keith. You all do realize the man is probably still grieving over the loss of his wife, right? Much as it sucks ass, I'm kinda with Keith. If you or I had two kids and they ended up fucking each other, then we'd would probably be somewhere within tbe same mindset. I don't think he's going to disown them, and I think Jayden might be able to convince him to at least take it easy on them, but for now we all have to wait for the next page to find out. Personally I'd like to see a comic about Keith, with the plot being around him and Bethany (Seb and Sarah's mom) before the accident. Maybe even the aftermath with all of them going through the five stages. Idrk, I'm a sucker for this series.

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  • solarium said:
    Hot damn though the amount of hate to Keith. You all do realize the man is probably still grieving over the loss of his wife, right?

    He's not the only one who's lost someone. The twins also lost their mother, and over time, their father, who, instead of taking care of them, chose booze and himself. It was twice as hard for them as it was for him.
    But you're right, let's wait for the next page.

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  • noveltwin said:
    You know what really sucks, like to the point it's outrageous. Finding out having sex with your sibling in the States of Colorado, Nevada, Montana, Idaho and Michigan, can get you Life in Prison.

    Fucking Life.

    For falling in love with the wrong person.

    To continue my little tirade, the State of Rhode Island the absolute Chads that they are, repealed their Law, making it so Consensual Incest between siblings above the age of consent is NOT a punishable offense.

    So to any couples it concerns, you know where to move to.

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  • I can respect his choice and determination, but then again, he is shooting his family in the proverbial foot. I can see how this goes. He's not gonna confront them about it, but he is gonna try and keep them apart functionally. Seb and Sera will get separate rooms (arguably should've had such a long time ago), He's gonna have rules like 'no locked doors', be home alot more, maybe sign them up for things so they're 'too busy' for eacother, and Seb and Sera are gonna be onto it from the start.
    Tbh, they were already planning to elope, and my instincts tell me they're gonna at some point. Guess Ketih just delayed the inevitable.

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  • noveltwin said:
    You know what really sucks, like to the point it's outrageous. Finding out having sex with your sibling in the States of Colorado, Nevada, Montana, Idaho and Michigan, can get you Life in Prison.

    Fucking Life.

    For falling in love with the wrong person.

    We are all puppets - someone tells us who is right to love and who is not, what to believe in, who to hate, how to live. Anyone who claims to be free lives in illusions.

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  • krosis said:
    What prevented him from supporting them? In recent years, he has done nothing but run away from problems by washing them down with booze. The children were alone in the background, but when they found something that was important to them, he turned on the father mode. I would say it's selfish.
    And anyway, what's the problem? - he could be happy for the twins, and not make a tragedy out of it. I would have done so in his place, and would have apologized to them.

    Well, the problem is, if someone else who's not cool with it discovers their forbidden relationship, plenty of trouble would arise (jail involved, or even the kids being taken from Keith).
    This isn't two teenagers doing stupid things teenagers do, they're fucking each other.

    Keith is right, he has to be a father first and that means making sure your kids don't do mistakes like this.

    Seriously the amount of comments bashing on him is incredible. Poor man had to handle at lot the best way he could and is he's being called a jerk for not letting his kids commit incest.
    Yes, we get it, this is a porn comic but I really appreciate someone in this cast of characters thinking this might not be a good idea at all.

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  • I'd like to point out the elephant in the room

    Yes they make a cute couple but being the fact there twins and share the same DNA (despite being opposite sexes on account that they have the same mom and dad) any offspring produced by the couple is almost certain to have some kind of crippling deformity or genetic disorder such as blindness, hearing loss, neonatal diabetes, limb malformations, disorders of sex development, schizophrenia and several others.

    As much as they look cute together imagine them having a child with one of or multiple of these disorders it would make the child's life 100 times more difficult and may even result in a early death (some other disorders include malformed hear or brain, ect)

    I know it's just a comic but I have to side with keith on this one it my hurt them now but in the long term he's saving them and any future grandchildren from unnecessary pain and suffering

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  • noveltwin said:
    You know what really sucks, like to the point it's outrageous. Finding out having sex with your sibling in the States of Colorado, Nevada, Montana, Idaho and Michigan, can get you Life in Prison.

    Fucking Life.

    For falling in love with the wrong person.

    noveltwin said:
    To continue my little tirade, the State of Rhode Island the absolute Chads that they are, repealed their Law, making it so Consensual Incest between siblings above the age of consent is NOT a punishable offense.

    So to any couples it concerns, you know where to move to.

    Please let's not. You said your piece, now let's not continue.

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  • Oh wow I am not scrolling up at all to see what’s been going on down here.

    Anyways!

    “Support” is not the same as “acceptance” in this context. Words have meaning. I think we’ll be fine.

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  • furreal987 said:
    Reality is often disappointing

    I didn't even know there was a legal rule against it.....

    Feel bad for him after reading all the comments, but also I felt like he's about to throw a metaphorical book at them.... And he's kinda right that they need to know about it. Also reminds me of the pages prior where she's was in the treehouse and asked what Seb would do if dad found out.

    To quote my partner... "don't think with the brain between your legs".

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  • Well, that settles that I guess. I wonder if Jayden is going to tip the twins off before he reaches them?

    As lame as it feels to have the "bad ending" be the way the story ends, it's also the one most grounded in realism.

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  • krosis said:
    He's not the only one who's lost someone. The twins also lost their mother, and over time, their father, who, instead of taking care of them, chose booze and himself. It was twice as hard for them as it was for him.
    But you're right, let's wait for the next page.

    Yeah, I can agree that Keith absolutely didn't make the right choice, but when you're stricken with grief, you do a lotta irrational things. If you think about it, Seb and Sarah's relationship, it could also be considered irrational.

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  • There's no way they'll be there when Keith gets back.

    They have their bags packed, they're ready to go. We've already seen through their arc how committed they are to this. I have my doubts that they will just wait around to see what kind of mood their father will zshow up in, knowing how unstable he tends to be. And it's not like they have any way of knowing about his little "change of heart" anyway.

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  • Has anyone ever thought what Keith would sound like? Who his "voice" may be?

    Also he is being rather sensible with his thoughts on this. :v Cool

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  • verify3lite23 said:
    I'd like to point out the elephant in the room

    Yes they make a cute couple but being the fact there twins and share the same DNA (despite being opposite sexes on account that they have the same mom and dad) any offspring produced by the couple is almost certain to have some kind of crippling deformity or genetic disorder such as blindness, hearing loss, neonatal diabetes, limb malformations, disorders of sex development, schizophrenia and several others.

    As much as they look cute together imagine them having a child with one of or multiple of these disorders it would make the child's life 100 times more difficult and may even result in a early death (some other disorders include malformed hear or brain, ect)

    I know it's just a comic but I have to side with keith on this one it my hurt them now but in the long term he's saving them and any future grandchildren from unnecessary pain and suffering

    As much as it's an unethical gamble and just generally a bad idea irl, your perception of inbreeding seems rather poorly informed and for some reason I'm in the mood to comment on it.

    First, you seem under the impression that they're identical twins who share the exact same genetics; they're obviously not considering they aren't both the same sex, so they're fraternal twins which are essentially the same as regular siblings genetically

    Second, children that are the result of sibling incest are not "...almost certain to have some kind of crippling deformity..."; they are more likely to express recessive genetics that are already present in their family, but the chance of one generation of close inbreeding from a family with no history of such issues resulting in crippling deformities is not nearly as high as is portrayed in popular culture. The real problems with inbreeding start to come in when you have multiple generations of inbreeding stacking recessive traits upon recessive traits (see most royal families throughout history).

    Third, there's not really any reason they have to worry about this in the first place because they can just not have kids or adopt if they really want them. There's exactly no reason why people being in a relationship would require them to eventually have children, and I feel like it's safe to say that they aren't planning on having any considering the circumstances.

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  • As realistic as his viewpoint is, I also can't exactly see in what world he'd be able to stop any of this.
    Despite his good intentions, all this comes down to is him saying "get out of my house." - He means well, but that doesn't mean he's going to make the right choice.

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  • verify3lite23 said:
    I'd like to point out the elephant in the room

    Yes they make a cute couple but being the fact there twins and share the same DNA (despite being opposite sexes on account that they have the same mom and dad) any offspring produced by the couple is almost certain to have some kind of crippling deformity or genetic disorder such as blindness, hearing loss, neonatal diabetes, limb malformations, disorders of sex development, schizophrenia and several others.

    As much as they look cute together imagine them having a child with one of or multiple of these disorders it would make the child's life 100 times more difficult and may even result in a early death (some other disorders include malformed hear or brain, ect)

    I know it's just a comic but I have to side with keith on this one it my hurt them now but in the long term he's saving them and any future grandchildren from unnecessary pain and suffering

    Actually the chances are.. relatively low for a defect to occur on the first incestual generation, rather the chances skyrocket as incest happens over and over again as generations continue.
    It's still higher than non-incest, but not by much.

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  • anyover said: Not just because they're probably not ready for the responsibility, but also because their theoretical child would be at high risk for fatal/debilitating genetic disorders. Like yeah, I get ya, breeding is super hot! But maybe this is not a good time for it.

    You do know that in real cases of incestuous breeding, those “inherent risks” don’t actually begin to show up until you’re a few generations in, right? We have many examples of this happening back in the medieval ages when people believed in the concept of “blue blood” or keeping the royal family line “clean” thanks to those things, we have since learned that inbreeding only leads to substantial risks when it’s done over generations.

    It irritates me when people immediately jump to the conclusion of “Incest baby?!?! Oh no it’s going to be retarted or have debilitating deformities!”

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  • whitewolf7987 said:
    As much as it's an unethical gamble and just generally a bad idea irl, your perception of inbreeding seems rather poorly informed and for some reason I'm in the mood to comment on it.

    First, you seem under the impression that they're identical twins who share the exact same genetics; they're obviously not considering they aren't both the same sex, so they're fraternal twins which are essentially the same as regular siblings genetically

    Second, children that are the result of sibling incest are not "...almost certain to have some kind of crippling deformity..."; they are more likely to express recessive genetics that are already present in their family, but the chance of one generation of close inbreeding from a family with no history of such issues resulting in crippling deformities is not nearly as high as is portrayed in popular culture. The real problems with inbreeding start to come in when you have multiple generations of inbreeding stacking recessive traits upon recessive traits (see most royal families throughout history).

    Third, there's not really any reason they have to worry about this in the first place because they can just not have kids or adopt if they really want them. There's exactly no reason why people being in a relationship would require them to eventually have children, and I feel like it's safe to say that they aren't planning on having any considering the circumstances.

    FUCKING THANK YOU. Someone else that understands how inbreeding works. Jeebus.

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  • Besides, now people are more often worried about conventional morality and other shit, than about the health of some individual.
    - Oh, my God! He fucks his sister/brother/dog/man/watermelons, whatever - "Heretic, burn the witch!"

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  • ……..I mean really, did any of you guys actually believe he would think differently?? Almost any parent in his position would’ve said the same thing. I know it’s just an incest comic, but let’s think logically here, folks.

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  • whatisablacklist said:
    Yap. If this were a real scenario you'd be right. This is porn tho, porn with a story. They've only been fucking for 5 days and teenage hormones are a bitch. Before their first fuck, they didn't seem to have any romantic feelings. He's right to put a damper on something that's already gone out of control, lifelong consequences for a few days of nutting

    Has it really only been 5 days? Seems like it has been longer and I didn't really see anything to indicate a known passage of time on this. I feel like they would have had to have been at this for longer for Seb's feelings to be so strong. And I also feel like their feelings towards each other maybe were not as strong as they are now, but clearly they noticed each other and were interested before they started messing around because the first time they were together Sarah was surprised at first, but then revealed that she wanted it too.

    So it feels like to me that both of them were looking at each other before now but just hadn't openly expressed it until Sarah walked into the shower with him and then Seb made his move. So I think Sarah had been throwing hints at him for a while before he finally decided to go for it.

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  • As far as what Keith is saying, I don't think he's necessarily saying he wants to break them up, I think what he is saying is that even with his blessing, since he acknowledges that they could indeed have genuine feelings for each other, that he can't, as a father, support their relationship while they are living with him and having him support them as a father in his home.

    It's not the same as saying they can't be together because he says no and is putting his foot down, so it's kind of a middle ground. We'll see how it goes, but I don't think his intention is to split them up immediately, I think he wants to sit down and talk with them about the long term consequences of their relationship if they stay together and that if they do stay together they can't do it the way that they have been while in his house and will have to be more independent.

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  • There is a solution but it won't come out of conventional morals. The big problem here is social damage.
    Even if Keith doesn't do anything for fear of losing them, it implies being conniving and he could even lose custody of the children if it becomes public. I would say both are between 15 and 17 years old? Too young to go it alone yet.
    The twins have many practical problems ahead of them.

    They cannot go to school as a couple. Just like a brother.
    They can't go to parties as a couple. Just like brothers.
    They cannot express their feelings as a couple. Just like brothers.
    They can't do anything as a couple.

    One day, it will become obvious what they are to each other in other people's eyes.
    They are too young to support themselves with jobs, home and school.

    Separating them is not an option either, as both are very close and Serah has this as her greatest fear.
    Losing Sebastian, someone else she loves.

    Seb and Serah know the canyons and chasms that lie ahead in their romance.
    The problem is how Keith will avoid being one of the traps they will live in and remain their father.

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  • After a tragic past, the three of them need to began life with a clean slate. After talking to the twins, Keith could find a place where incest is not treated so harshly, then sell the house and move there.

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  • To all the people saying they're siding with Keith, why exactly are you reading this story then? To be scolded for your kinks? :P

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  • Dont think ill ever look at this site the same again after watching chapter 1 from time to time ;) , i never knew about these other chapters, and i got to say after years of no good furcom's i feel alive again after reading all this honestly its amazing.

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  • fudge said:
    You do know that in real cases of incestuous breeding, those “inherent risks” don’t actually begin to show up until you’re a few generations in, right? We have many examples of this happening back in the medieval ages when people believed in the concept of “blue blood” or keeping the royal family line “clean” thanks to those things, we have since learned that inbreeding only leads to substantial risks when it’s done over generations.

    It irritates me when people immediately jump to the conclusion of “Incest baby?!?! Oh no it’s going to be retarted or have debilitating deformities!”

    Well, I'm glad I could learn something from the comments on an incest yiff comic! You'll have to excuse my reluctance to Google something like that lol

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  • Abort, abort! If he comes in to 'be a father' now after just... not for so long, Sarah is going to explode at him. All she's going to be able to see is that she and her brother have finally found some happiness/love, and her father can't stand them being any less miserable and alone than he is. Thing will be said that cannot ever be taken back, and he will lose his children too.

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  • Keith was not a good father and is trying to be, too late for the twins. The tears may be because it hurts to separate them or because the twins are together.
    Yes, Serah is going to explode at him, since he is taking away something good for them. There is the option of leaving home.

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  • nekod said:
    I think deep down he wants to support them and is happy for them ("Regardless how I feel"), but he has to be the protective father first. That's why he was in tears recently, not because this situation is overwhelming (he already had time to process before Jayden arrived) but because he has to be the bad guy for the twins sake.

    Could be

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  • noveltwin said:
    You know what really sucks, like to the point it's outrageous. Finding out having sex with your sibling in the States of Colorado, Nevada, Montana, Idaho and Michigan, can get you Life in Prison.

    Fucking Life.

    For falling in love with the wrong person.

    In all honesty that is messed up, life sentence for something consensual… if it was forced I understand prison but Life is too long.

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  • clyax113_s_xaces said:
    I don't get it. What is he referring to when he says "[the twins] are risking much more than they think on this?" Risking what?

    My guess is their own relationship of being siblings. My guess anyway

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  • clyax113_s_xaces said:
    I don't get it. What is he referring to when he says "[the twins] are risking much more than they think on this?" Risking what?

    Perhaps it refers to the fact that they risk being discovered and suffer social exclusion and that this harms them and their relationship. Let social services come and separate them.

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  • grey-cat said:
    Perhaps it refers to the fact that they risk being discovered and suffer social exclusion and that this harms them and their relationship. Let social services come and separate them.

    Why would that happen? They're both 18 or older, right?

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  • zarthosfox said:
    Has it really only been 5 days? Seems like it has been longer and I didn't really see anything to indicate a known passage of time on this. I feel like they would have had to have been at this for longer for Seb's feelings to be so strong. And I also feel like their feelings towards each other maybe were not as strong as they are now, but clearly they noticed each other and were interested before they started messing around because the first time they were together Sarah was surprised at first, but then revealed that she wanted it too.

    So it feels like to me that both of them were looking at each other before now but just hadn't openly expressed it until Sarah walked into the shower with him and then Seb made his move. So I think Sarah had been throwing hints at him for a while before he finally decided to go for it.

    Yeah part of why the series is called [blank] mornings. It is following them day by day. It's possible much of their attraction stemmed from each other being the closest person to them that wasn't the father and likely having seen each other naked before and used to it, once one got horny and started with the other and it started getting sexual they did as teenagers do and jumped in headfirst with little to no thinking.

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  • sylamorase said:
    He cannot support this, but that doesn't mean he has to condemn it.

    "Suppose you throw the coin enough times, Raziel. Suppose one day... it lands on its edge." - Kain

    But does one even truly have a choice? One can only match, move by move, the machinations of fate... and thus defy the tyrannous stars."

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  • alistairdante said:
    But does one even truly have a choice? One can only match, move by move, the machinations of fate... and thus defy the tyrannous stars."

    "Oh no. Every time you turn up, something monumental and terrible happens. I don't think I have the stomach for it..."

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